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Saturday, December 18th, 2010
Please check my six sentence? (Year Level 3)?
1) I like watching the television called "Animal World" I look every time. I love animals. 2) The woman pushing the cart is green and has blonde hair. 3) Hi, I'm Peter. I want to book a table tomorrow at 7am. It is for two people. My phone number is 1234 4) The man asked share table with a lady, the lady said "it's ok. But my friend will come in half an hour." The man said, "fine, I have to take my flight to Mexico in twenty minutes. "5) to avoid dehydration, 1) you must drink lots of water 2) you must not drink alcohol and coffee. 6) In my counrty. On New Year's Eve, family members had dinner together, and we usually eat something special, like Tukey. The best time is to midnight, when the bells rang twelve times. Cheers everyone for the new year.
I'm guessing you do not speak English and this for an English course? I do not know exactly what you want but I'm just going to correct these sentences and clean up a bit by fixing grammar, spelling and punctuation and changing the wording a bit so it sounds better to someone who speaks English fluently. 1) I like watching the television called "Animal World", I show all the time, I love animals A: I like to watch a television show called .. " Animal World "I watched all the time, I love animals 2) … The woman pushing the cart is green and has blonde hair. A: The woman pushing the cart is green and has blonde hair. 3) Hi, I'm Peter. I want to book a table at 7 am tomorrow. It is for two people. My phone number is 1234 A: Hi, I'm Peter. I want to book a table at 7 am tomorrow for two people. My phone number is 1234. 4) The man asked to share table of a lady, the lady said "it's ok. But my friend will come in half an hour." The man said, "fine, I have to take my flight to Mexico in twenty minutes ". A: The man asked to share a picture of a lady. The lady said," Sure. But, my friend is coming in half an hour. "The man said:" It's very good. I need to fly. In Mexico, in twenty minutes "5) to avoid dehydration, 1) you must drink lots of water 2) you must not drink alcohol and coffee A:. To avoid dehydration you need to drink plenty of water and you should not drink alcohol, coffee. 6) In my counrty. In the New Year, family members dined whole, and we usually eat something specific such as Tukey. The best time is to midnight, when the bells rang twelve times. Cheers everyone for the new year. A: To celebrate New Year's Eve in my country, family members have dinner together. We used to eat something special, like Turkey. The best time is to midnight, when the bells rang twelve times. Everyone cheers for the new year. Hope this helps.
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